UX Writing | Technical Writing | E-Learning Design
UX Writing | Technical Writing | E-Learning Design
Selfie Booth Co.
Redesign
UX Writing | Content Design | UX Research




01
Overview
Project Goal
Make it easier for customers to understand their options and book the right photo booth for their needs by simplifying the site’s structure, navigation, and copy.
Project Duration
August–November 2023
Roles
Content Designer, UX Writer, UX Researcher
Client
Selfie Booth Co. (SBC)
Tools Used
Google Docs, Google Forms, Optimal Sort, Figma, SEMrush
Problem
“They can’t really tell the difference between the booths.”
When I asked the customer service rep I worked with what frustrated customers most, she shared potentials customers had trouble differentiating between the different booth options.
At first glance of the company's website this is what I observed:
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Long paragraphs
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Long scrolling
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Non-grammatically correct headlines
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Inconsistent grammar and vocabulary.
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Confusing navigation
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Repetitive language
Clients want to know the following from a rep:
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Which booth is right for me?
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How much does it cost?
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What’s included?
This problem led to client frustrations including:
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Longer phone calls with representatives
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Back-and-forth emails with representatives
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Product uncertainty
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Potentially not attracting more clients
Results Snapshot
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~40 % fewer customer questions about booth differences
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~15–20 % projected increase in bookings
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Positive feedback on clarity, pricing transparency, and inclusivity
Why This Work Mattered
Beyond helping guests feel comfortable as a photo booth attendant, I wanted to use my UX and content design skills to improve the company I was representing.
Selfie Booth Co.’s purpose is to create joy. I saw that at events, but the website didn’t spark that same energy. Planning an event is already a lot, so booking a photo booth should feel easy.
02 Research
Initial Research
Discovery Methods:
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Generative research – explored user needs and motivations before defining solutions
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Surveys – gathered quick quantitative signals to validate early assumptions
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Baseline usability testing – watched users complete key tasks on the existing site
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User interviews – listened for goals, pain points, and behaviors
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Content audit – reviewed clarity, tone, and information flow
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Competitive analysis – studied structure and messaging across comparable sites
Analysis Methods:
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Affinity mapping – grouped qualitative data to identify themes and insights

I started with an affinity map to visualize patterns from my generative research.

Then I regrouped my findings into technical areas to shape the site redesign.

I started with an affinity map to visualize patterns from my generative research.

Stacy could be a potential SBC client as she's planning a wedding.

Megan has rented a service in the past for her wedding and knows the steps to take for her next event.

Stacy could be a potential SBC client as she's planning a wedding.

Compared my own navigation path with users’ to reveal mismatched expectations.

My initial site map captured every detail but ended up more technical than helpful.

In my map redesign, I simplified the structure by grouping content into clearer, more intuitive categories.

Compared my own navigation path with users’ to reveal mismatched expectations.
03
Writing & Design
Navigation
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Combined “Weddings / Corporate / Parties”
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Added "About"
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Renamed pages

Content
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Condensed long paragraphs into scannable sections
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Added consistent specs (setup space, prints, attendant, backdrop, sharing)
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Placed booth details before testimonials
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Built a side-by-side comparison grid

I write notes and appreciate feedback discussions.

I note my thoughts throughout a project, mixing personal observations with research-based insights.

I write notes and appreciate feedback discussions.

Booth Comparison Chart
I redesigned the chart to emphasize information over transactions, and added banded rows for better readability.
Writing
Before: “Delight your event with Selfie Booth Rentals.”
After: “Long after the last dance, Selfie Booth keeps the memory vivid.”
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Replaced Get a Quote → View Pricing
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Added price ranges for transparency
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Clarified jargon (boomerang, backdrop)
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Tone: confident, friendly, direct
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Button labels: clear verbs in Title Case (“View Packages,” “Book Now”)

This voice chart is to keep consistency in voice, language, and style.

During my content audit, I analyzed site wording to group similar terms, keep tone consistent, and tighten the copy while preserving key keywords.

This voice chart is to keep consistency in voice, language, and style.
04 Testing & Outcomes
What I Tested
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Watched people shop the new flow to see if they could find a package faster and feel more sure about their choice.
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Asked them to imagine booking a booth for an event and talk through their decisions.
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Timed each task and followed up with short questions to spot hesitation or confusion.
Methods
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Usability testing (5–7 participants). I timed how long it took to choose a booth and reach checkout
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Comprehension checks — asked users to explain booth differences after 30 seconds
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Confidence scale — “How confident are you in your choice?” (1–5)
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Feedback collection — on pricing transparency and visual trust
Lyssna A/B Preference Test
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7 participants compared the original homepage with the two redesigns
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71 % preferred the iteration 2.
Impact
The redesign turned a wordy, confusing site into a clear, trustworthy one.
Customers could see what they were paying for, compare booths easily, and book with fewer questions and more certainty.
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Clearer structure → faster decisions
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Transparent copy → higher trust
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Streamlined form → lower drop-off
Even as an unsolicited project, it showed measurable potential: happier customers and fewer support calls.

Preference Testing Options
I gathered feedback on which homepage design people liked or disliked. The results shaped Iteration 4 (it was not in the initial A/B testing).

Preference Testing Results
Using Lyssna, I gathered information from 9 participants.
05
Personal Reflection
Clarity is Customer Service
I started by noticing confusion from behind a reception desk.
I finished with a design system that helps people choose confidently, proving how much small content shifts can reshape trust.
It strengthened how I:
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Translate research into microcopy and structure
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Balance storytelling with strategy
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Build empathy into everyday UX writing
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